Silver Pen

Hey Rosey! Here reviewing for Task 2 of the Instructor Competition! This is a good piece, and I think it has the potential to be pretty great (I bet people ...

Wow. I almost forgot that this was a writing site for a second! I mean, all the language, and name-calling.. People are just trying to help, Rawr. Just to let ...

...I-I think I peed myself. *looks down* No, I'm serious. I really think I did. And alike others, I'm a Twilight fan. Of course, it's not the best book I've ...

I liked the feel of this piece - it was interesting. And the fact that it was choppy.. it worked. I almost thought it was a poem when you started ...

Wow. Absolutely wonderful. Breath-taking, if I can say that without being too terribly cliche. But seriously, that's a great piece of work. And I don't think I saw one type ...

What I think you need to do is read the piece out loud: that way you can find your own errors (typos and incomplete sentences.) I do like your writing, ...

I thought the poem was beautiful and had a lot of soul put into it. You were part of the poem - the story - and that's what I liked ...